Good Afternoon my friends!
I've gotten feedback from 2 of my 3 first readers and the third is the one that is doing most of the grammar work and there seems to be a lot of that. That doesn't really surprise me in anyway since I was just writing and not overly thinking. It all gets cleaned up in the wash is my motto when it comes to stuff like this. The feedback I've gotten has been completely Amazeballs! There were things that I thought would come up, and they did, but I got enhancements and suggestions that blew me away. It's been made clear that these characters are very vivid and real to me and so I have made some assumptions in the writing because it is just self evident to me, but I didn't really lay it out well in the writing. I was surprised when they would ask me questions about a characters motivation and after I explained it, they would say "Yeah, I didn't get that aspect of them" or something to that effect. That' good! I was given particular spots where they felt that I could add in more character development to really bring out what is in my head onto the page. I'm excited all over again!
